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Asher
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Posted on 08-05-2009 at 07:12:44 PM  
 

Just made this logo for practice:
 

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Comments plz :)
 
PS :ar: I've not much experience with logos so don't be harsh :he:
 


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Posted on 08-05-2009 at 07:12:44 PM  
 

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Posted on 08-05-2009 at 07:20:10 PM  
 

The 'ying yang' style circle in the middle seems... squished :/ Stretched more vertically :neutral: In fact, the entire image does... some aliasing on the corners too...


Message edited by ghostnatyphon on 08-05-2009 at 07:20:35 PM

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Posted on 08-05-2009 at 08:15:35 PM  
 

I dunno, the perspective doesn't look right. Perhaps if you used some sort of model?
 
Nice choice of colours, though. :)


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Posted on 08-05-2009 at 08:22:36 PM  
 

Yes the colors are nice, however the perspective and the way it looks stretched seems odd.


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Posted on 08-06-2009 at 04:40:15 PM  
 

fixed the aliasing but can't do much about perspective, I haven't transform the perspective of the shape in any way:
 

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/741/vologoo.jpg


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Posted on 08-07-2009 at 11:31:02 AM  
 

great one Asher

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Posted on 08-07-2009 at 10:30:50 PM  
 

Perhaps it's just the 3D effect that is making it look bulkier vertically, therefore the perspective seems to be squished...? Uttaresh, thoughts? (Since you're the critique ;) )


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Posted on 08-08-2009 at 01:33:38 AM  
 

What I think is that the original logo is meant to look like it was taken from the top. You've made it look three-dimensional by giving it sides, but consider this: if you really look at an object like that, from the top from one side, wouldn't there be a vanishing point? I mean that wouldn't the eye seem wider at the bottom (where you're looking from) and gradually become narrower at the top (as it moves towards the vanishing point).
 
I don't know if you, or anyone, got that ... but I hope it helps! :)


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Posted on 08-08-2009 at 02:46:22 PM  
 

You got a point there Uttaresh but transforming the perspective of the logo would distort its original shape so I avoided it :)


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