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n°10870
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Posted on 12-06-2007 at 05:07:03 AM  
 

Hi all

 

I've only Macromedia Flash, no Photoshop or other graphic software, so i'm trying my best to make full use of the gradients function in Flash. Also, i'm not very good at grahpics and such, so forgive me if it doesn't seem quite good.

 

Here's a logo I made for myself. It would be nice if comments/suggestions were given? Thanks!

 

skysausage_logo_updated.png

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Posted on 12-06-2007 at 05:07:03 AM  
 

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Posted on 12-06-2007 at 06:56:49 AM  
 

I think it looks pretty good. :wink: But here are a few tips for you though.
- I think the shadow is too heavy, perhaps you can decrease the shadow a bit.
- The wings look like they have decrease opacity. This looks a bit strange when they reach the sides of the globe.
- I think the two white spots in the bird's left eye should be made black.

 

I hope this helps a bit. :biggrin: Don't worry, the overall work looks fine. :happy2:

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Posted on 12-07-2007 at 04:36:06 AM  
 

thanks gruzz!

 

i've fixed most of the things you mentioned, but the two white spots in the eye are meant to be reflection. i placed the left wing in front
 and lightened the shadow a bit.

 

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Posted on 12-08-2007 at 02:42:28 AM  
 

The logo is nice :oui: , I would suggest following things:

 

1. You should add more blur to the shadow

 

2. If it's possible then add gloss on the sphere

 

3. Try any other combination of colors for the sphere :wink:

 

Let's see if it makes any betterment in your logo :jap:

 

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