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Posted on 08-07-2008 at 05:27:56 PM  
 

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Not looking bad :cool:though the usb stick bit (That goes in the usb port, I dunno what you call it) doesn't seem to be attached to the usb stick... It's in the right place and all, I just don't feel like they are together... more feels than looks you understand... it's hard to explain...

 

Also the corner in the top right of the image (As you look at it) isn't rounded like the front and how I'd expect, and at the bottom of that side, It is sharper than the front looks, so to me it seems odd. :neutral:

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Posted on 08-07-2008 at 05:27:56 PM  
 

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Posted on 08-07-2008 at 08:46:19 PM  
 

"Corrected the curves to some extent as pointed by Ghost"
Thanks Ghost :happy2:

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Posted on 08-07-2008 at 08:55:45 PM  
 

No problem, what else am I here for?  :fouet:

 

Looking good, keep 'em coming :smile:

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Posted on 08-07-2008 at 09:19:19 PM  
 

Why can't i see those corners before posting the first one? :xeyes: :fouet:  
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Posted on 08-08-2008 at 06:54:26 AM  
 

Very good work on that USB icon :oui: the metallic shading is nicely done , just some little things that can improve your icon :

 

:ar: Instead of giving the hole icon a Drop-Shadow , try to put a slight shadow beneath it

 

:ar: use a reflected white-transparent gradient at the lower part of USB instead of Inner-Shadow

 

:ar: Remove stroke from the tip of USB . I think you have used stroke on a layer on which you already have used the anti-aliasing technique , you should always avoid stroking such layers :oui:

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Posted on 08-08-2008 at 12:43:49 PM  
 

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:ar: use a reflected white-transparent gradient at the lower part of USB instead of Inner-Shadow

 

@ Ghost,Thanks :tongue:

 

@Asher,Thanks for the suggestions :tongue: ,

 

i get the first and third point but what do you mean by "reflected white-transparent gradient",

 

i followed the 1st and 3rd points and the icon now looks more better :oui:  and i like to go for the second also before uploading modified icon, please can you explain that..  :angel:

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Posted on 08-08-2008 at 01:25:56 PM  
 

At the bottom of the usb it looks like you have used an inner shadow, but instead you should draw a small white to transparent gradient to give the same but better effect...

 

I'm not sure where the inner shadow is that needs replacing :err:

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Posted on 08-08-2008 at 05:31:59 PM  
 

Instead of Inner-Shadow , just use a white to transparent gradient and select 'reflected' as the gradient type :wink: I hope you understand now :angel:

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Posted on 08-09-2008 at 04:31:39 PM  
 

@ASHER, i just called myself with a new name "Mr. Dumbo" :he: , actually i got confused by "reflected", i have also used it a number of times but don't remember the name, that's why i asked.
Anyways the USB icon looks better now :oui: ..

 

Modified USB icon And  PHONE ICON :mdr:

 

Ghost, Phone is for you my friend :tongue:

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Posted on 08-09-2008 at 04:40:03 PM  
 

Wow... that phone icon is truly amazing... big, but amazing... :tongue: The picture you've put on it is really good, the ripple effect is really good... the stylus is unbelievable... and that middle button is beautiful... :loveit:

 

Oh, and the usb looks better :tongue:

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Posted on 08-09-2008 at 04:48:28 PM  
 

thanks Ghost :happy2: , i am editing the post but during that you read existing post :tongue: ,
Thanks, your appreciation keeps me doing better :oui: .

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Posted on 08-09-2008 at 05:25:35 PM  
 

Th USB is looking better :oui: but I am still suspicious that you haven't removed the white inner-shadow completely :he: the text has some aliasing and you surely don't want t apply the anti-aliasing technique on it since it will affect the text , so just reduce the opacity of text and aliasing will fade away :wink:

 

The middle button on the phone and the picture are really looking good :oui: but don't you think the phone is looking flat :neutral: ?

 

I have noticed that you are making icons in different sizes and proportions , it doesn't show consistency :boulay: just try to make them in same sizes and keep the proportion same :jap:

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Posted on 08-09-2008 at 06:14:59 PM  
 

Asher wrote :

I have noticed that you are making icons in different sizes and proportions , it doesn't show consistency :boulay: just try to make them in same sizes and keep the proportion same :jap:

 

Good point, I agree. :oui: Consistency is pretty important once making a full icon set.

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Posted on 08-09-2008 at 07:43:29 PM  
 

Yes the phone is kinda flat, i tried to add thickness but failed, please give any trick without transforming of phone, because i am creating every icon a bit 3d and this one goes off..

 

"I upload my icons here by resizing in the set all will be 500x500, but some icons cannot be too small like this phone, but i keep consistency point in my mind, thanks :jap:  "

 

Usb icon with gradient modification

 

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I think i got it, i added some thickness at the top of the phone and perhaps i might get it done :oui:

 

EDIT:
 :he: A microphone (i know it needs improvments :meuh: )

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Posted on 08-10-2008 at 10:21:28 PM  
 

I think the bottom edge of the microphone should be rounded slightly, it seems too flat. And the top reminds me of a golfball :tongue:

 

Phone's looking better :great: though the reflection doesn't seem right somehow...

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Posted on 08-10-2008 at 10:40:42 PM  
 

Thanks Ghost, the flat base is because the microphone cannot stand like that with a round base, that's why :biggrin:
and yeah the top is similar to golf ball but it is working well for the microphone :tongue:

 


What is wrong with the reflection of pen(as i got because nothing else has reflection)?

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Posted on 08-10-2008 at 10:44:03 PM  
 

Well.. I wouldn't expect the outer parts of the phone (The thin black rim etc) to reflect the pen, as they don't have the crystallisation, and also the reflection seems opaque to me :neutral:

 

And I understand it needs a flat base :tongue: But I mean it should be rounded so that it is a circular base, from that perspective point I would have thought it would be curved slightly to show a flat ( :wink: ) circular base.

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Posted on 08-11-2008 at 12:57:11 AM  
 

Great work, especially love the HTC icon. :great:

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Posted on 08-11-2008 at 01:19:02 AM  
 

rahul123 wrote :

Yes the phone is kinda flat, i tried to add thickness but failed, please give any trick without transforming of phone, because i am creating every icon a bit 3d and this one goes off..

 

"I upload my icons here by resizing in the set all will be 500x500, but some icons cannot be too small like this phone, but i keep consistency point in my mind, thanks :jap:  "

 

Usb icon with gradient modification

 

EDIT:
I think i got it, i added some thickness at the top of the phone and perhaps i might get it done :oui:

 

EDIT:
 :he: A microphone (i know it needs improvments :meuh: )

 


You may reduce the opacity of the stylo's reflection, put it like 30% or something.

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Posted on 08-11-2008 at 11:03:02 PM  
 

Uttaresh and cradle4life, thanks for your comments :biggrin:
hi guys, an updated HTC phone icon

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Posted on 08-11-2008 at 11:05:33 PM  
 

Looking better :cool:

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Posted on 08-12-2008 at 06:30:54 AM  
 

The phone is looking better :oui: and the mic is nice too :wink:

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Posted on 08-12-2008 at 08:45:53 AM  
 

I like the icons

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Posted on 08-12-2008 at 03:05:01 PM  
 

@Ghost, your sugesstion has worked :great:

 

Thanks ASHER and BREAKFASTCLUB :jap:

 

hi friends, now here is my finest creation :he: (as i believe :lol: )
A HANDYCAM :666:

 

Waiting for comments.......

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Posted on 08-12-2008 at 03:15:57 PM  
 

Wow... I mean... wow... that is a bloody good icon! Huge, but bloody good. Definately your best creation :great:

 

Though the shadow under the main part of the camera doesn't seem right somehow...

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Posted on 08-12-2008 at 03:30:34 PM  
 

Hey Ghost, feel fully free to use your Critisizer 3000 :tongue: , don't make a wait for next post just tell me out what is wrong, i really need suggestions to improve myself :oui:

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