| Aqua Crystal Profil: Penguin | After my last attempt at icons I've decided to go with something a little simpler...much simpler. Anyway I've decided to try making glowing adobe icons and I was wondering what you all thought. So here are my first two.

Yes I have noticed the funny colouring around the edges and I'm working on getting rid of it. Message edited by Aqua Crystal on 11-27-2008 at 10:59:33 PM ---------------

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ghostnatyphon Love, is beautiful. Profil: Top Penguin | They don't look like they're "glowing" I'm afraid
And in terms of the weird colouring, how have you applied the gloss? If you've put a white to transparent and then cut all the bits outside the rectangle, don't. Use layer overlay (Alt click between layers) and you won't get the weird edges.
And I only just noticed the outer glow, but it's cut off, and is too weak. ---------------
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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Top Penguin | The aliasing at the edges occurs because you either used a layer mask or a clipping mask ... or maybe you just used Ctrl+click to load the selection. See, Photoshop makes curves smoother by averaging the colours at the curves. However, when you mask it or select it using Ctrl+Click, the averaged part is not selected. Therefore, you get that aliased layer on top.
The solution: Well there is no perfect solution ... except maybe if you manually select each pixel and apply the shine. Either use a blending option as Ghost suggests - or simply move the gloss one pixel up. ---------------

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Aqua Crystal Profil: Penguin | First I don't use photoshop. Second there were no masks. Third that is not an outer glow it's a mistake the glow is supposed to be inside the black shape not outside. Also the thing about the gloss I didn't get at all probably because you asumed I was using photoshop again.
However Im' fixing the glow and I have noticed the dodgey gloss which I forgot to mention. ---------------

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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Top Penguin | Actually, what I said is probably true for just about all image editing software. ---------------

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ghostnatyphon Love, is beautiful. Profil: Top Penguin | What are you using? ---------------
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Aqua Crystal Profil: Penguin | Ahem...sorry if I sounded a little snappy. I'm using The GIMP.
I've gotten rid of the outer glow. The gloss is still a little off but how is it now? ---------------

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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Top Penguin | Yep, the gloss definitely looks better now - but you can still see a little aliasing if you really focus.  ---------------

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Tanshin Profil: Big Penguin | I am liking these quite a bit. The gloss definitely looks better now. As Gruzz said, you may want to get a better/brighter orange.
Maybe a tiny tip, if you can, lower the top of the L in Fl. Trust me, we had an entire discussion on that L in the adobe pack I just made. | |
ghostnatyphon Love, is beautiful. Profil: Top Penguin | Haha, Flash's menacing L Get's 'em every time.
I don't know, I'm really disliking the inside gradients... it just doesn't look like it's glowing ---------------
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Tanshin Profil: Big Penguin | Even if it doesn't look like it's glowing (it kinda does), it does have a cool effect. Something a bit different. | |
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ghostnatyphon Love, is beautiful. Profil: Top Penguin | Looks better - like you said, just not my taste And please call me Ghost (Can't stand my username ) ---------------
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Tanshin Profil: Big Penguin | Looking much better. I'd say keep going with those icons!
I would say to do something with the text as it is a bit bland but, I don't really know what you could do. The new ones are black and "inset" into the icon. They are also transparent behind the text. Again, I don't know what can be done in GIMP. | |
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Tanshin Profil: Big Penguin | Raise the L a bit. It should line up with the top of the F. I like the Dw icon, the green is nice. They do look much more glowish now.
You can look at my pack in my igloo for the inset thing.
http://igloo.crystalxp.net/tanshin | |
Aqua Crystal Profil: Penguin | Oh so it should be in line. OK.
Just downloaded your icons and I see what you mean about the inset thing now. I'll see what I can do about that.
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I'm testing the "inset" thing on my InDesign icon. How does it look? It is very subtle but I think it's beneficial. Message edited by Aqua Crystal on 11-30-2008 at 09:03:00 PM ---------------

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Aqua Crystal Profil: Penguin | As this isn't related to the previous post I'll make a new one.
I've made a basic preview image. I would like to put my first ever icon pack in the gallery but I'm having trouble uploading at the moment and I'm not sure it'd work.
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Tanshin Profil: Big Penguin | I like the preview image. I'm hoping you show more in it though.
As for the inset, I honestly can't see it without tipping my laptop. I'd make it a touch darker. I'll try from another computer and tell you what I see. | |
ghostnatyphon Love, is beautiful. Profil: Top Penguin | Ya, darker inset. Don;t overdo it though.
For the preview, perhaps add the other icons in smaller sizes, perhaps around the bottom of the PS icon in a sort of semicircle, or just in a line..? ---------------
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Tanshin Profil: Big Penguin | I'd say put them to the side, kind of like the iTunes/Finder Cover Flow, just flat though, not in perspective... if that makes sense. Message edited by Tanshin on 12-02-2008 at 09:58:06 PM
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ghostnatyphon Love, is beautiful. Profil: Top Penguin | Ooh good idea ---------------
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Aqua Crystal Profil: Penguin | ...I presume you're talking about Mac stuff there because I'm lost. Any way I was considering adding more icons to the image but just...didn't. Any way I'll look into the inset. ---------------

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