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Posted on 07-08-2010 at 08:48:01 PM  
 

Hello everyone -
 
Last few weeks I have been working on my first (real) 3D animation film. It was hard work, but I am pleased with the end result. Even tough there are always things I want to improve upon. ;) I invite you all to watch it on YouTube! *click*
 
Any comments you have can be added to the video or in this topic!  :smile:


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Posted on 07-08-2010 at 08:48:01 PM  
 

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Posted on 08-19-2010 at 02:55:20 PM  
 

its good its great anything but... that chick is something that isnt great enough. the legs. when it`s running, the legs does not moving fast at the same time. but you can improve it by quicker legs movement or slower its background. so i give you marks for this.

 

Line story: 9/10
Animation: 7.9/10
Background: 9.9/10
Character: 9.5/10
Quality:9.75/10

 

I really loves the chick really. So do your best! :)


Message edited by Ikmalhidayat on 08-19-2010 at 02:56:18 PM

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Posted on 08-22-2010 at 09:22:03 PM  
 

Thanks for the comment! :)


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