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.drago. Leaved this forum for a bit!! Profil: Top Penguin | nice one but need shadows ---------------
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Tanshin Profil: Penguin Pro | Was something up with the paper, or was that a ripple effect?
Still, great job ---------------
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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Penguin Pro | Quote :
Was something up with the paper, or was that a ripple effect?
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Read my description on deviantArt ... it explains that.
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nice one but need shadows
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Thank you, and this is just the base sketch. I will color it in Photoshop later, and give it shadows and other effects.  ---------------
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Tanshin Profil: Penguin Pro | Very nice, especially for a WIP. I'm assuming that the final version will include scales and shading throughout and such, so I won't comment on that now. ---------------
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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Penguin Pro | Yes, I will include scales and also a texture on all areas of skin ... but they shall be very subtle. You'd have to look closely to notice, though they should help improve the overall look of the painting. ---------------
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Asher Genius is not born , it is made.... Profil: Moderator | I can see the improvement on lips and eyes in full resolution , keep it up  ---------------
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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Penguin Pro | Third WIP. A lot more progress. Fixed the shells' position and the waist. And no, Asher, it wasn't because it was too thin ... it was because the ass would not be big enough.  
Message edited by uttaresh on 03-20-2009 at 11:50:26 PM ---------------
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Tanshin Profil: Penguin Pro | Now it is really shaping up to be something! Great job! ---------------
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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Penguin Pro | Thx. Any critique?  Message edited by uttaresh on 03-21-2009 at 01:28:45 AM ---------------
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Tanshin Profil: Penguin Pro | At this point, I'm waiting until you do either the hair or tail. ---------------
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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Penguin Pro | Both will take a long time, and both will need drastic alterations. For example, I have noticed that her head looks too big ... mostly because her tail is out of proportion. Disney may have made it small, but mermaids' tails should be long and elegant. So ... I'm going to have to change that. The rear area will be bigger and more prominent. For the hair, I dunno. It depends on where I put her. If she's underwater, as I right now believe, her hair should be wavy ... sort of it now, but more hair-like, and like its flowing. But if I decide the rest of the picture looks like it's not in water, her hair will have the be different. But anyway, you can still tell me if the bikini's position is OK now. Message edited by uttaresh on 03-21-2009 at 04:43:25 AM ---------------
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Asher Genius is not born , it is made.... Profil: Moderator | she looks better her left cheek seems oblique though , it just needs some smoothness , I can't say much about colors since I've never done such coloring in PS , just try your best to improve your coloring skills I am sure you will find many tutorials for this. Message edited by Asher on 03-21-2009 at 04:46:46 PM ---------------
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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Penguin Pro | When you say "her" left, do you mean our right? ---------------
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Asher Genius is not born , it is made.... Profil: Moderator | yup , the sharp edge gives the edge an unnatural look ---------------
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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Penguin Pro | OK, I'll keep that in mind. Though I'll probably make that cheek a little slimmer later on. ---------------
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Tanshin Profil: Penguin Pro | Ah, he is right about that cheek. As for the shell bra, it seems to be fine at this point. Much of this will all come together in the future versions. ---------------
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Tanshin Profil: Penguin Pro | I'd say lower the six-pack/ab action a touch. I don't think Arial is that "buff" lol ---------------
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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Penguin Pro | I haven't given her a six pack, what are you talking about? Her "abs" are flat. You can't see the muscles. ---------------
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Tanshin Profil: Penguin Pro | I see something going on in there. Or maybe she just looks a little too bony... I think she needs to be fattened up a tiny touch around the stomach area... ---------------
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uttaresh The Penguin Master Profil: Penguin Pro | I don't really get what area you're talking about. Could you circle the specific areas?
Oh, and keep in mind that she's a mermaid in the ocean. She's supposed to be a little bony. Of course, if you think it's too much ... ---------------
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